Guest Post By CJ: Butterflies In Formation, a review of “A Maid for All Seasons III”
August 20, 2008 by devlinoneill
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Wonderful review, cj! I love hearing your impression of Dev’s book from the sub perspective. And I love your “butterflies in formation” metaphor! You capture Lisa Carlson perfectly when you say “Lisa matures in this book from being completely spoiled to just cheeky.” Dev does a great job showing her growing and maturing in Volume III as opposed to the good-intentioned but naughty brat in Volumes I and II.
I am so happy you enjoyed the book, and I look forward to reading your reviews of Dev’s other books you have on order. Excellent review, cj!
Hey CJ, congrats on a nice review. You bring a definite personal angle to it in your focus on the “brat” perspecive. May we expect more guest posts from your keyboard? Perhaps, “Bratting from A to B”, or “Everything I needed to know I learned (you fill in the rest)”.
Michael and Karl,
Thank you both very much. I was coerced into writing the review. I am not a writer by any stretch of the imagination but I do like to learn.
I am not sure if Prof. Dev can handle editing another one of my amateur reviews.
I really did enjoy reading this book. I am currently reading Vol. 2. I finished Vol 1 already. I have vol 4 and Corporal Idaho waiting in the wings.
Was this review the “homework” we’ve been hearing so much about lately? If, as you say, you “like to learn”, I’m sure there are folks around here who like to teach!
Like me, you, cj, need to do some work on your avatar. I’m sure it’s a terrible resemblance and doesn’t show your true beauty at all. Stop procrastinating and open a wordpress account of your very own.
great review cj!!! brat high-five!
i really enjoyed the personal bits you shared with us – thanks!
(you definitely deserve a gold star on your homework!…
even if it doesn’t get you out of a spanking)
EXCELLENT job, CJ! I know someone who is very proud of you.
xoxo
“brat high-five!”
Kristina, a Top high-five would be across your bum.
Kristina and Gwen,
Thank you both very much! Plus now I am free to really play.
Michael,
“Top high-five would be across your bum.” I really think that would be at Top low-five!
cj
Gwen’s right, CJ, I’m very proud of you. But I think we need to set the record straight about your being ‘coerced’ here. I’m sure you said that so your fellow brats wouldn’t think you were trying out for Professor’s pet, but I seem to recall it was YOU who first brought up the idea, hesitantly and even shyly, that I help with your writing. So rather than give you some lame ‘How I Spent My Summer Vacation’ type practice assignment, I thought you’d do better writing about something you like. To no one’s surprise, the professor is once again correct. *G*
Enjoy your well earned vacation from my incredibly strict tutelage, CJ, and let me know when you are again ready to drink deeply of the Pierian spring.
Hm? Gold star? Yes, I’ll get one from Gwen, right after your paddling – just to prove to your sister brats that you aren’t a suck-up. See how good I am to you?
-Dev
‘top low-five’ good point cj – brats are so smart!
( l ) (this is a representation of me mooning michael!)
Ahhhh Prof.Dev,
“See how good I am to you?”
Dang I knew you were not going to let me off the hook on the “coerced” remark. Yes you are right I did ask and you were very generous with your time and help.
So I would like to graciously offer my genuine gratitude for your “strict tutelage” Prof. Dev.
Brat Student,
cj
I enjoyed your review cj!
Careful you don’t end up “Moonstruck” Kristina!
You’re very welcome, Brat Student CJ. *G*
-Dev
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CJ–if memory serves, my usual book reviews during my school days usually consisted of, “Read this book. You’ll enjoy it.”, stretched out to 300 words or so.
Yours is much better….:-)
Nicely written, nicely done!
Dr. Ken
Thank you Season.
Dr. Ken I tried “Read this book. You’ll enjoy it.”, stretched out to 300 words or so” but Professor Dev would have none of that.
Thank you for your kind words.
cj
“Top high-five would be across your bum.” I really think that would be at Top low-five!”
cj, depends on the position of your bum. If I were standing you in the corner and crouching down to adjust your panties to frame your rosened bottom and you started to squirm, the five I administer across your tushy would be high from my perspective. See, Tops must take everything into consideration. *G*
“( l ) (this is a representation of me mooning michael!)”
Kristina, shade that bum pink, no, make that red, and that would be an accurate representation of you AFTER you crack that moon. And since you’re being very naughty, even for a brat such as yourself, I think we need to purge that naughtiness from your system with an enema, so this is the before picture, ( x ) and the after picture, ( o ) of how your bottom will look. Shaded very deep red of course. *G*
“Careful you don’t end up “Moonstruck” Kristina!”
Season, very good, I couldn’t have said it any better, thanks. And Kristina WILL end up ‘Moonstruck.”
Gwen, I know you must be so proud off your girls, and all this bratitude they are flashing.
‘Moonstruck’ – that was clever Season! i think it was inevitable.
awww michael – couldn’t i just stand in the corner instead?
Dang Kristina I am thinking the Michael has read too many of Dev’s books.
Tell you what you run and I might step out and accidently trip him as he goes after you…
cj
“awww michael – couldn’t i just stand in the corner instead?”
Yes, Kristina, of course you may stand in the corner, I love giving naughty brats corner time, but you will be hopping from foot to foot as you retain your enema and also display a crimson tushy.
cj, since you are so fond of citing the Brat Code when you come to the aid of your sisters in bratitude you will also find yourself in the corner alongside Kristina retaining your own enema with a very ouchy bottom. You and Kristina may rub sore heinies, but not your own. I’m sure it’s in the Brat Code about giving relief to fellow brats during mutual punishments. Oh, and the next time you try to trip me, cj, I will not only use the leather sole but have you cut a switch. That goes the same for you, Kristina, the next time you try to run from your just desserts.
Geeesssshhhh Uncle Mikey you are getting pretty tough on us angelic brats afterall the trip was an accident.
cj
Oh boy. The leather sole, the switch, AND the E word. See what happens when you poke the bear, girls?
-Dev
sorry cj – didn’t mean to get both of us into the corner!
he seems to have selective listening!! *pout*
(cj – did you ever read the book or see the movie Matilda)
there should be a sign! Please do not Poke the Bear…or Else!!!
don’t worry professor – i have learned!
No problem Kristina it seems we are always in trouble.
No I have never seen or read Matilda, but I will look it up.
I did not know they had bears in Italy or New Jersey
*G*
cj
“angelic brats”
LOL, cj, now there is the mother of all oxymorons, especially where you and Kristina are concerned! BTW There are black bears in New Jersey. We had a case back in April of one entering a high school playground and he had to be captured and relocated to a state park. I was going to do a post about it and a camping trip spanking with my ex, and now that you reminded me I will make sure I do it.
“…there should be a sign! Please do not Poke the Bear…or Else!!!”
Kristina, I thought that would go without saying. But isn’t it written in the Brat Code: Brats will ALWAYS poke the bear. And besides, you and cj look adorable with your red tushies on display in the corner. I’m trying to talk Dev into making it the new header picture above, but he doesn’t want to make the other girls jealous, so at the next company picnic we need to get a group picture of all the brats lined up showing off their red and ouchy bottoms.
Poke the bare what?
Dr. Ken
Brats are always ‘tempted’ to poke the bear, i think the status of their behinds helps them to make the decision!
can we come out of the corner now?? please??
“can we come out of the corner now?? ”
Well yeah, since Michael already took the picture. And I think maybe Doc Ken could use the space anyway, for a reflective time-out after that AWFUL pun! Geeze Louise! *G*
-Dev
Yes, Kristina, as Dev said, you and cj may come out of the corner. I hope this corner time has helped calm you both, and if not just reach back and feel how hot and ouchy your tushies are for a better reminder.
Dev–awful puns are the only kind I know….
Dr. Ken
Now I think of it, same here. *G*